Evanescence

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by The Elemental Dragon (queen of dragons) on Saturday, 28-Oct-2006 11:03:30

My last until I can think of something else:

Evanescence
By
Ashley Gorzelany

I hold you close,
The love of my life,
I don’t ever want to lose you,
But you’re gone,

You’ve vanished right out of my sight,
Your life taken too soon,
My heart grieves for you,
You were the love of my life,

I hold you,
An empty shell,
Icy cold and still,
Blood everywhere,

You’ve vanished right out of my sight,
Your life taken too soon,
My heart grieves for you,
You were the love of my life,

Seeing you lay there deathly still,
My heart is in my eyes,
Your ashes scattered over the endless see,
The picture of beauty just like you,

You’ve vanished right out of my sight,
Your life taken too soon,
My heart grieves for you,
You were the love of my life,

Post 2 by Musical Ambition (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Saturday, 28-Oct-2006 11:05:50

This is good. I can actually picture someone sayign those words to someone. You can definitely grasp the meaning, and the feeling to this.

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 31-Oct-2006 8:07:29

I can see it too and the poem is beautiful

Post 4 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Friday, 16-Feb-2007 19:05:02

I like it.

Post 5 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Friday, 16-Feb-2007 20:17:17

Very good.

Bob

Post 6 by dream lady (move over school!) on Saturday, 17-Feb-2007 3:53:40

How beautiful. Death is a bully waiting to be conquered.